Part VIII
With a huge lump in my throat,
I turned to him and said,
‘I don’t know why I’m doing this,
But to you, my life I owe.’
‘You are the man, who marred my life,
And the one who made it too,
It’s you, who made an orphan out of me,
But who gave me a new life, too.’
‘I think enough has happened now,
And I needn’t explain any more,
You are all I have of my past.’
With this, I walked out of the door.
I felt glad when I heard his foot steps,
Finally, all questions had their answers,
He patted me on my head,
As we journeyed forth, thirty years…
Completeness came to my life,
Sometimes life carves its own way,
It’s God’s way of telling the world,
That He’s the king, they say…
After a century, I got a father,
Nostalgia was what I felt and breathed,
Each time he would pat me on my head,
Me, closer to my past, he would lead…
It’s as if I’m his penance,
And he’s nurtured me from the roots,
Maybe then, it was his hand,
That guided me through life’s pits, and wounds...
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P.S: I'm happy to announce that this series has finally come to an end. Whether you liked t or not, is not my problem :P But I am always ready for comments OR compliments (The latter, ofcourse is a better proposition :D )
Catcha later with something different... :)
10 comments:
I liked it!
I Loved the whooole thing!
:D
Wow, you write amazingly well!
P.S- so, what's up next? :P
Omg,omg,omg!
Too good!:D
Try getting it published?
In some mag or something? :P :P
aanchal: awww...thanks!!
Well, the tag is next ;)
prerhu:Published? naw, its not that good :/
Well, I didnt comment on most parts but I read all of them, and they're sooooooo amazing!
Too good!!!
Bravo
kika: awww, neva mind that, it's more imp. u read thm, as that is why i write...
thanks! a lot :)
I will surely suggest your name to ekta kapoor becoz u can write her nxt serial:P
Frankly,i didn't get the hang of what really happened.
Don't worry,i don't have much understanding power!
aki: Looks like you didnt like my poem AT all :(
And you mentioning ekta kapoor was even worse :((
Boo hoo!!
And you didnt even understand it!
:(((
yeh rona dhona bhi ekta kapoor serials mein hota hain:P
I liked the poems but the story still seems a little complex to me!
Aku is a little baby! Please forgive her :(
And do NOT criticize yourself :(
You've written awesomely =D
I super like, if that's wutcha wanna here, babbeh :P
:D
Yay!
aku : Well, i dont understand what you just wrote :|
dish: aww...you're such a sweetheart!! :) mwah!!
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