Monday, January 28, 2008

Hmmm...



Spirit…

The humor that he had,
The smile that made me swoon…
His silly ways were quite surprising,
Because they swept me off my feet.
Never in my life had I witnessed,
A man of vibrant hues, moves neat…

The humor that he had,
The smile that made me swoon…
He splashed color into my life.
A life that seemed lifeless, colorless...
I had begun to smile, to laugh...
He was the man, no more, no less…

The humor that he had,
The smile that made me swoon,
He was the joy of my life,
Till the day he committed suicide.
He had given me reason to live...
And lost his…and died…

His funeral day was the last one,
After which I never cried,
No tear ever fell down my eyes…
His ‘spirit’, I decided to keep alive…







5 comments:

Abhilasha said...

This is d first blog i ever wrote...yikes! yippie!

Unknown said...

wow!!
ok this is one of the best poems ive read of urs..

but no im sure i can write like tht too...lol i wishhhh

Abhilasha said...

hey thnx...ur so nice to ma poems sukham...

Disha said...

I loooove the last para!
It made me swoon :P
:)

P.S: I loved the whole poem. But I am prejudiced to the last para :D
I love tragedies!

Abhilasha said...

all thanks accepted dish...